Score: 10

"@_x"

submission: Queers of War

date: July 27, 2009

I would say that this was well done...but I went blind two movies in.

Score: 10

"Yeah..."

submission: : A Woman's Deceit :

date: July 10, 2009

I think that every single human being would rather see a shiny and clean lie than the pile of filth the truth actually is.

Score: 10

"Spot on"

submission: : Fashions :

date: July 10, 2009

Someone once said that originality is the extremely artful and precise theft of another person's original ideas. And that is exactly what has happened with subculture styles and fashions. Sad, but we are a race of borrowers. As long as humans are humans, its going to keep happening

Score: 10

"Exquisite"

submission: A Dying World Keeps Smiling

date: August 6, 2009

You did the shift between emotions very well. Sad, then somewhat upbeat and happy, then wary but prepared. In this song, I saw a grizzled cop who cracked his case, but failed to fulfill a promise he made to the victim's family. His sense of failure which in turn brings about sadness is banished when he comes home to his loving family. Then comes the next morning: he gets ready for work, puts on his badge and straps on his gun, and walks back for another day's work.

Score: 8

"Amazing voice!"

submission: Lilium- Redone by Lady Arsenic

date: July 22, 2008

Sorry if this comes across a bit corny, but you sound like a bona fide angel. I mean, holy SHIT!!! Hearing you sing that song actually made me cry. You did a fantastic job on the cover, and yes, the mic did kinda detract from it a bit, but you more than made up for it. Now, I put an 8 on here because of the piano. It came out too harsh. Try making it lighter and loftier. Again, I must offer you praise for your singing. There is not enough room on this page to describe how amazing your voice is. Please keep singing!

Score: 9

"very good! but it needs work"

submission: Unattainable Freedom

date: July 13, 2008

I agree with djstormx. the bass did come out a bit loud. Try an upright bass instead of an electric one, or perhaps a cello. A good story to the song your wrote, and the song itself is very good. 9/10